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primeideal ([personal profile] primeideal) wrote 2013-07-09 05:45 am (UTC)

Thanks so much for reading and your thoughtful comment! I had not considered that the changes in tone over time were part of the broader arc and changing perspectives, but that's definitely plausible and would fit. There might be other specific narration patterns that die out similarly...? The pacing of the "my name is" introductions jumps to mind.

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